Some people believe that computer games cause violent crimes among teenagers and must be banned everywhere in the world. Do you agree or disagree?
People arguing about dangerous of computer games. Does it create a reasons for violent crimes among teenagers and must be prohibited everywhere? I totally disagree with with statement because crimes have always committed and first of all bullying contributes to teenagers violent crimes more that computer games.
Firstly I want to say that crimes have always been. It means that in the past people did not have computer games but they still committed crimes. For example the book called “Robin Hood”. In this book they were doing crimes against bad and reach people, but they did not have computer games.
Second reason is about bullying among teenagers. It means that it creates much more aggressive moves that computer games. For example Columbine. They were not playing computer games but they have done this massacre.
In conclusion I would say that computer games does not create any reasons to do violent crimes. And sometimes playing video games getting you better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, so, still, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20754716981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32057574603 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540880503145 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7005958547 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6923076923 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2307692308 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285589405026 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964648246276 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785659376722 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17722780726 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872528452926 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.05 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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