Some people believe that the family has a greater influence on child development. Others believe that other influences like television, friends, music have little impact. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is generally accepted by some individuals that the development of a child is highly dependent on his family roots. However, other groups of people consider that these days friends and entertainment sources are equally responsible for their growth. This essay will discuss both the views in detail and lead towards a reasonable conclusion.
On the one hand, elders and parents hold a special place in the growth of an individual. In other words, youngsters motivate themselves by seeing the achievement of their parents and consider them as their role models. Moreover, from early age children are inculcated moral values by their parents which plays an essential role in their future life; whenever it comes to respect seniors or to speak the truth. To illustrate, according to a survey done in 2019, it was found that children of age group (13 to 15 years) walk on their parents' footsteps as they always take recommendation from their elders. Thus, the activities of the child are greatly influenced by their family.
On the other hand, in this contemporary era entertainment industry is highly blamed for having a bad effect on Children's growth. To be more specific, they no more discuss their problems with their elders, instead, start comparing their situation with movie scenes and try to solve them in the same way. As a result, mostly get stuck in difficult situations. For example, start doing pick-pocketing to resolve money-related issues and many other things which severely affect their future development.
In conclusion, there are numerous factors that can affect child growth whether it is movies, friends, or a bad company. But, from my perspective, if the child understands the basic value and guidance given by their family, then they will never jeopardize themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...solve them in the same way. As a result, mostly get stuck in difficult situations...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18900343643 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81611293844 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5685919561 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120106219682 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476846304272 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444831925704 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839197819092 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669255264867 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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