Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be banned. Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Since, advancement and development of the technology, we, human are more and more dependable on technology ever in our history. It plays a vital role in our life. Talking in general or populated area is becoming very common. Whereas, some people are saying that conversation in public places should be banned because of many reasons. I shall discuss both the side and give my opinion in coming paragraph.
Technology has changed our life totally compared to life we used to life before with less use of it. One of the most affected or used product of our routine life is the smartphone. It has become very useful for our day to day life. As, we can be connected with our loved one and also do our work and business, no matter where we are and what the time zone we live in. There are many reasons to use phone at public places, such as, almost 30% of our work could be done on phone and for that we need to do conversation with other person. While, there are situations when it does not matter we are in crowded place or not, such as emergency call from home or at work. Secondly, we spend more time at work compared to past and get less time to talk with our loved one, so while travelling back to home from work, people choose to talk and get update from their family and friends.
On the other hand, there are situations and time, when we can not use our phone conversation in crowded place. Library, class room, meeting are some of the situations and places not allowed to use mobile devices for personal use or talk. Some of the public places, such as museums, schools, theaters, and art galleries, government or privet authority has banned use of such device to keep other people enjoy their visit and time. At some places authority put cellular device jammer to keep human away from use of phones.
To put in nutshell, there is no doubt that smartphone has made our life very easy and reduce level of stress, but, as a human being, we have to consider time and situation before starting any conversation on phone call. It is advisable to keep voice as low as possible, so no one get disturbed by our talk.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...place. Library, class room, meeting are some of the situations and places not allowed to us...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...obile devices for personal use or talk. Some of the public places, such as museums, schools...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'places'' or 'place's'?
Suggestion: places'; place's
...ple enjoy their visit and time. At some places authority put cellular device jammer to...
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Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to keep human away from use of phones. To put in nutshell, there is no doubt th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, in general, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46907216495 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35043068214 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492268041237 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6973624467 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263478757515 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889012821094 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798986231321 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170336295339 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645549122274 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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