Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary era, sport is one of the crucial activities in our busy lives. Over half of the sports needs more physical strength compared to mental strength while the remaining sports need almost 100 % mental ability than other physical strength. I shall discuss both the views in the coming paragraph and my own opinion.
Nowadays, mostly, youngsters are attracted to sports, as it gives fame and publicity after achieving a good score in a particular sport. Athletics' physical structure and ability play a vital role to acquire success in any game. Physical stamina can be developed by exercising and practicing sport. Many sports such as cricket, soccer, volleyball, and tennis are needed strong body structure to play it and to get the victory. Whereas mental strength is required with physical strength. To take some crucial decisions, a team player requires a stable mind, experience, and team support. For instance, in a soccer game, team support, coordination, and physical strength get many goals to win the game.
On the other hand, some sports barely require only a good mindset. In many sports such as chess, carrom, cards, poker, and table tennis, where body stamina is optional of the game to win it, but a serene mind is most important. These sports also need practice and support from the teammates same as other on-field sports. for example, chess is one of the common game played only by using mind than body strength.
In this competitive world, it does not matter what type of sport you are playing. The different game needs different physical and mental strength to win the sport. In my opinion, sports played on-field need both physical as well as mental strength, while indoor games could be won solely without good body structure.
To put it in a nutshell, the requirements of any sports are different than others. Sportsman has to develop themselves as per their games requirement and practice as per need. Both strengths must be there for good performance and acquire victory.
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also, but, if, so, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04179104478 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58588138272 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54328358209 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9472612285 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.45 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282792140968 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927995730286 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782410028847 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178348578207 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856655260929 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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