Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
These says, public debate has been going on over whether a negative situation like an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money is best to accepted. Despite of this opinion, others suppose that it is better to try and raise high such situations. My firm conviction is that these situation should be try and improve.
On the one hand, a bad situation has a wealth of merits. To start with, in the 21 century, people have many opportunities to look for ideal jobs but it is synonyms with demanding of standard for work also have higher than that in the past. By mean, people who can not follow or have struggled with hard standard would be break out and must find unsatisfactory jobs. For instance, currently, 70 percent of many factories, companies have putted on standard about experiences, skills that they depend on profession knowledge, while the number of employees who just graduated from university or collage have not conditioned to improve their experiences. Thus, unsatisfactory job is the best to accepted. The second, people work in some place where it is not their ideal jobs would have shortage of money, compared with people have 5 to 9 jobs. This is true that when a successful employee search for 100 dollars per month, people have worked in unsatisfactory jobs would find just under a haft, approximately 40 dollars each month.
On the other hand, compelling arguments can be made that it is better to try and improve such bad happens. The point is some bad situation have become to innovation for people in order to fight and work by all power for their life. For example, researchers argue that 5 in 15 people would raise hand to try with difficult matters. In Vietnam, while someone drawback with unsatisfactory jobs which it is tidy up job , some other people still learn tips or kind of experiences about it. After that, Linh Nguyen is the typical person who opened a tidy up company whole in Vietnam. She leads more than 2 hundred staffs with a succeed company.
On the basic the above discussion, I assume that a bad situation is better to try and improve oneself in a while. Accordingly, this issue merits futher attention from both governments and residents even employees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: try to
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Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
... situations. My firm conviction is that these situation should be try and improve. On the one ...
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Message: Did you mean 'tried'?
Suggestion: tried
...ction is that these situation should be try and improve. On the one hand, a bad si...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...uments can be made that it is better to try and improve such bad happens. The point is ...
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ssume that a bad situation is better to try and improve oneself in a while. Accordingly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, look, second, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, kind of, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81530343008 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72994449631 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54617414248 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.237338642 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.388888889 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304301251731 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10218315907 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071915809992 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202645813807 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702046535191 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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