Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is no doubt that schools play a crucial role in the upbringing of a child. Several schools include homework in their curriculum, which is preferred by some people, whereas there are many who are against this practice. I completely agree with the former and in my below essay I will discuss both views and put forward my opinion.
Undoubtedly, one of the most significant drawbacks of homework is that students get very little time to relax. Owing to the lengthy school hours, kids get so much consumed that they are barely left with any strength to focus on other recreational activities. For example, in India most primary schools operate for 5-6 hours, and as most schools assign homework, these children end up spending majority of their time studying. If children do not get enough time to unwind themselves, this would have a detrimental effect on their mental growth, which eventually may lead them towards depression.
Nevertheless, despite the above disadvantage, I strongly believe that schools should allot homework to children as this will help in reducing screen time. For instance, it is often seen that when children are left with some spare time, they usually spend it in playing video games or in watching television. If these children are made to complete their home assignments, they may get diverted from these habits and can focus more in studies. Another important benefit associated with this is that homework helps in revising certain subjects which require regular practice. To exemplify, subjects like mathematics and science require frequent revision, without which it is impossible to secure good grades in exams.
In conclusion, although it is understood that homework poses extra burden on children, I feel that they are crucial as they divert children from usage of electronic gadgets and also they help in securing good grades in exams.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, nevertheless, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16013071895 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65622756478 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4168578794 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267859840386 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897990585197 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469291536998 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15868705466 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425165845943 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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