Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays students are bombarded with homework because of which many parents are complaining about it. Whereas many people believe that homework is an important part of the study. In this essay, both views are discussed and explained how homework can play a crucial role in the education of a student.

The first phase of our life is education. Effectiveness of learning is very much important for a student to build his future. Today, where study course is tremendously increased, it is very important for a student to understand the concepts properly within a short time-span. so the repetition and practice of learnt concepts are necessary to realise and test our understanding. if a student finds it difficult to solve or answer the questions, that means he still needs to learn the concept more accurately. But in this fast life, teachers need to complete the course in the school, so they ask students to do these practice in the form of homework. if students do it honestly at home, without copying from any ready-made resources, and ask questions that he was unable to answer, then he is following the correct way of study provided that teachers clear student's doubts accurately. that's why it is said that "practice makes a man perfect".

Although homework is a key component of education, many teachers treat it as a task and load meaning-less work on students. these much work keep a kid so much busy in it that he can't even do any other activity for himself or go to play for even an hour. that's the reason that many parents are now against homework.

To conglomerate the essay, looking at both the views, we can agree that if teachers can smartly decide the homework and students can utilise the understanding out of it, homework can be a key part of education, otherwise, it can be meaning-less labour work.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, honestly, if, look, so, still, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86305732484 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87125711291 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544585987261 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5166062977 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178887088408 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655474544207 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804867697902 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130268657363 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934989797185 0.056905535591 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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