Professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers should be paid more than those in sports and entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is highly debatable topic that the pay scale of sports and entertainments profession should not be higher than that of persons involved in healthcare and teaching industries. Here, I will try to discuss both the side of the debate and explain why I slightly disagree with the given argument.
In our society, doctors and teachers play a vital role in an individual's life. As teachers are said to be the next person after parents who decides that what ethical values and behavioural discipline should be infused into a child. Teachers shape and develop internal character of a person, where as doctors and nurses take care and maintain a person’s physical health. These two professions are crucial parts of the society, without whom a good and healthy society cannot be built.
On the other hand, sports and entertainment are an important part of everyone’s life. Athletes are working hard on themselves and become capable of representing the state, club, region or country to various tournaments. Same way, a professional of entertainment industry need to go through specific body transformation to behaviour changes as per the requirements of various entertainment shows and programs. And individuals from these fields are said to be the most influencers to the major population.
Doctors and teachers definitely helping society to build up, but compared to them, entertainment and sports persons are taking more risks to their life and they influences far more mass in their lifespan. So according to my opinion it’s justifiable if professionals from sports and entertainment industries are paid higher than those of doctors and teachers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...rs and teachers play a vital role in an individuals life. As teachers are said to be the ne...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...develop internal character of a person, where as doctors and nurses take care and mainta...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'influence'
Suggestion: influence
...aking more risks to their life and they influences far more mass in their lifespan. So acc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34339622642 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10823845858 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6796197338 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204083501173 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651288033428 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484563179935 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115530772704 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046063360148 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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