Some people believe that traditional music album and single consumption is vital for the music industry. On the other hand, others think that digital streaming and downloading play bigger roles.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Music is one of the popular art form nowadays. Certainly, online platforms has contributed largely to this popularity but some people opine that traditional music albums and solo compositions are still essential for music industries. This essay will discuss both views and provide evidence as to why downloading and digital streaming are essential to music industries.
Social platforms and digital media provide numerous advantages. Firstly, the outreach of musicians towards their audience becomes simple. For instance, a music video on YouTube or Instagram will facilitate an artist to acquire information regarding their fan following. Secondly, companies investing fortune in these songs are gaining profits owing to digital streaming and pubilicity through internet. A music launch before movie release is a tangible evidence for this.
On the flip side, making a music album and releasing it in a compact disc from is old school. However, few years earlier this was the most practiced way of preserving music and many famous songs are still available in those forms but the latest advances in technology has made this conventinal method obsolete. Also, these ways jeoparadise with the singers artistic abilities sometimes and the risk of infringement is a constant danger. Recently, an old playback singer claimed that a student has stolen his tunes, but lack of proof rendered the artist helpless to prove it.
In conclusion, with the advancement of technology, clearly the contribution of social media in growth of music industry is unavoidable and the traditional methods do have many disadvantages online platforms.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52589641434 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88043675889 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645418326693 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6840532558 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208298018819 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709739075246 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643896120732 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1247182142 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799558666712 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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