Some people believe that university education should be free for all. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Over the decades, the educational approach has remained disputable among certain demographics of society. These people claim that everyone should access the study platform free of cost. This essay will argue why fees to education are extremely necessary despite some lacking.
People have always been wary about their children’s educational system and its payroll structure. They are justifiably worried about spending plenty of money for high quality education, despite various important expenses to bear in life. In addition, in recent times a trend has been made that good education comes with good money. Research shows that about 60 percent in Bangladesh relate to illiteracy because of the inappropriate, inequality and unaffordable layouts. These few instances have bolstered concern among parents to demand for free education where rich or poor both are treated equally.
Apart from all the positive sides, the idea that schools should be free of cost is not appropriate in many ways. Running an organisation requires a huge variety of effort, management, expenses, maintenance, dedication and time which no one can do for free. Another dominant factor is security and care for every student. Research proves that out of 100, 80 teachers and staff work for payment which they will only get if the source of literacy is not free. These highlights that one way or another everyone is interconnected and free education will be a great loss for those people.
To conclude, there have been several compelling arguments but I profoundly believe that the education system to be of minimal cost. Government must think to reduce the payments and provide a similar learning process for both low to affluent society of people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...e decades, the educational approach has remain disputable among certain demographic of...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xtremely necessary despite some lacking.
People have always been wary about their...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good money'.
Suggestion: good money
...een made that good education comes with a good money. A research shows that about 60 percent...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
...good education comes with a good money. A research shows that about 60 percent in Banglade...
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Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...where rich or poor both treated equally.
Apart from all the positive sides, the...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Research
...is security and care for every student. research proves that out of 100, 80 teacher and ...
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Line 5, column 581, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n will be a great loss for those people.
To conclude, there has been several comp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45588235294 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96417478903 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669117647059 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6801152676 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266501477013 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799204981046 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058879271067 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14276919412 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442063941259 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...e decades, the educational approach has remain disputable among certain demographic of...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xtremely necessary despite some lacking. People have always been wary about their...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good money'.
Suggestion: good money
...een made that good education comes with a good money. A research shows that about 60 percent...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
...good education comes with a good money. A research shows that about 60 percent in Banglade...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...where rich or poor both treated equally. Apart from all the positive sides, the...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Research
...is security and care for every student. research proves that out of 100, 80 teacher and ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 581, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n will be a great loss for those people. To conclude, there has been several comp...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45588235294 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96417478903 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669117647059 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6801152676 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266501477013 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799204981046 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058879271067 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14276919412 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442063941259 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.