Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast

Essay topics:

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.

Healthy environment is a necessity of healthy living, however,through our selfish acts we have degraded the quality level of environment. Recycling is one of the best solution to cut down on household waste. Many people believe that government should make it compulsory by forming a law for recycling and this is the only solution left. I completely disagree with this belief and this essay presents supportive statements to justify my disagreement.

To begin with, I believe that only law making is not the real solution for any problem. A new formed law will not ensure that all the people will follow it. For example, there are already many laws for the betterment of society such as road safety and women protection but still there are accidents and mishappenings this means that rule violators will always be there. Instead of making law, awareness campaigns should be organised to aware people about the poor quality of environment and contrast the quality of environment from last few decades, this will leave a tremendous remark on the audience that we have spoilt our surrounding and there is a need to improve it.

Another reason that defends the need of law is that self-realization is more powerful. If there exist a responsibility among the citizen of the country towards the society and environment, then there is no need of law, people would do their best to protect the atmosphere. They will recycle their waste and also promote the use of renewable resources.

To conclude, healthy environment is truly needed for the healthy growth of the society. there is an urgent need to recycle waste product in order to reduce the amount of waste and save the environment. I completely disagree with the belief that making a law is the only possible solution to accelerate recycling household waste. there are many other simple ways such as awareness campaign and self-realization is the most prominent tool.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, for example, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04702194357 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87623320435 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520376175549 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2218552116 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287237970589 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097785053141 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708264660705 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180635001179 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381103170847 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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