Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking
pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Even though a majority of populace believes that paparazzi is obvious phenomenon owing to stardom, a minority that they should not intrude the privacy of renowned personalities. Paparazzi leads to countless hassles in the life of famous celebrities, while I cogitate that primarily it endows immense benefits to them by escalating their popularity.
The insane following by the freelancers in order to click the photos of every moments of the life of superstars put them in dilemma. Seemingly, the famous people have phobia about being advertised about their conditions, thus they always try to shun them. As a result, they have to put such actions which prove perilous for them . Also it is biased to overlook the example of high-profile accident which caused to the death of Princess Diana which were occurred just to get rid of paparazi in a event. Henceforth, the actions of random clickers always put the life of stars in risk which eventually leads to
fatal repercussions.
On the other side, the paparazzi intensify the publicity of stars by exploring to public regarding the personality of their favorite stars. The freelancer documents the life of great personality through photos and exhibit the reports about their philanthropic deeds. To exemplify , the report stated by New York Time, in the gone calendar year , the journal
which are published by paparazi has direct nexus with proliferation in the TRP of famous celebrities in the U.S.A. Therefore,the assets associated with the benefits cannot be overlooked.
In conclusion, although the paparazie impose countless threats to the celebrities, it provide colossal advantages to them by improving their image in the community. Undeniably, I reckon that reporters put myriads of positive effects on the career of famous person by depicting their images in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ugh a majority of populace believes that paparazzi is obvious phenomenon owing to...
^^
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...ads to countless hassles in the life of famous celebrities, while I cogitate that primarily it en...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... countless hassles in the life of famous celebrities, while I cogitate that prima...
^^
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ties, while I cogitate that primarily it endows immense benefits to them by escal...
^^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ch actions which prove perilous for them . Also it is biased to overlook the examp...
^^
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...actions which prove perilous for them . Also it is biased to overlook the example of...
^^^^
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a which were occurred just to get rid of paparazi in a event. Henceforth, the act...
^^
Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ccurred just to get rid of paparazi in a event. Henceforth, the actions of rando...
^
Line 6, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...repercussions. On the other side, the paparazzi intensify the publicity of st...
^^
Line 6, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he paparazzi intensify the publicity of stars by exploring to public regarding t...
^^
Line 6, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...life of great personality through photos and exhibit the reports about their phil...
^^
Line 6, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... their philanthropic deeds. To exemplify , the report stated by New York Time, in ...
^^
Line 6, column 347, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...New York Time, in the gone calendar year , the journal which are published by pa...
^^
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
... nexus with proliferation in the TRP of famous celebrities in the U.S.A. Therefore,the assets asso...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...mous celebrities in the U.S.A. Therefore,the assets associated with the benefits can...
^^^^
Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...countless threats to the celebrities, it provide colossal advantages to them by i...
^^
Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...untless threats to the celebrities, it provide colossal advantages to them by improvin...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... depicting their images in the society.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, i reckon, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33561643836 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.954571293 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585616438356 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1103904557 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128381455493 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465863137685 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304380914687 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542742741133 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402904437824 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.