Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs
because of the freedom they offer.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Something that everyone will be agree about that we need to work to earn money and to meet our financial commitments. While some people prefer casual or part-time job, I believe full-time job is better than casual.
It is certainly true that there are some benefits behind casual job. Most of the casual jobs come with fexible timing, and therefore a employee enjoys the previlage to manage his or her working schedule. For example, one of my friend always works as a part-time employee, so that she can pay more time to her child. If she was working as full-time staff, she would need to hire a maid for her child. A casual job is a good option when one of the family member is working as a fulltime employee.
On the other hand, a full time job provides several advantages. Most the people, who prefer a full time job is firstly, because it helps for long tern financial planning. Since a full time job provides a flexible income for longer time, it supports a stable planning, which eventually helps us to meet our critical financial commitments, such as child education, housing loan, and so on. For instance, If I was not working as a full-time employee, I would ever able to finance my wife’s education and car loan. In addition to this, as most of the full time positions are permanent, such jobs provide a job security and peace of mind.
In conclusion, although some people prefer to engage in casual job, as it allow more time to spend with family, people who need to meet several financial commitments full-time job is the best option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ltime employee. On the other hand, a full time job provides several advantages. Most t...
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Suggestion: fulltime
...vantages. Most the people, who prefer a full time job is firstly, because it helps for lo...
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Suggestion: fulltime
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...an. In addition to this, as most of the full time positions are permanent, such jobs prov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66304347826 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55200838496 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4313714228 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240440560657 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106756415878 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889211450151 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183319720128 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059354833217 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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