Some people prefer the lifestyle and activities offered when living in a cold environment. Others prefer a hot environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People always like engaging on activities and uplift the lifestyle as much as possible from their current position. There might be an environment influence on likelihood of enjoying the activities on people to people. Some are preferred to have cold background while some are for hot. I think, feelings due to the external factors impact on performance on the activity, based on the need of fulfilment.
Cold environment provides refreshment on body and will create enthusiasm to enjoy. Therefore it will relax on the mind and emphasize the energy for doing things. For example, lifestyle of hill country people have more active than the down south. However, this humidity level is not good for activities and it will impact on the lifestyle indirectly to achieve their own goals which influence on the people economy and social life.
On the other hand, hot environment provides bright setting to work. This is better for the gamming and enjoying the lifestyle. For example, the most preferred outlook for sport is low humidity sunlight hot day. Nevertheless, it provides the better background, due to the un-comfortability and perseverance people mind set creates reluctance on lifestyle changes and activities, which have to conduct in open environment. Therefore, people love to work inside under the air-conditioned environment or avoid normal life activities.
Considering the above factors, both environment creates god and bad sides on lifestyle and activities. Further, people mind set and the need requirement gives the priority of the going thing rather other expects. Therefore, I believe that, environment is secondary fulfillment, which provides comfortability to some this and people mind set make it prefer or not based on the existence need.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36823104693 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00787239235 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541516245487 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1964987007 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300730412967 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992235536141 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657702344762 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19473504135 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049449235414 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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