Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Be it a house or an apartment, everybody needs a roof on their head to live in a city. Although, some people choose living in a house while others think that there are more benefits to live in an apartment. This essay will showcase the benefits and disadvantages of both the types of housing, but, ultimately prove that residing in an independent house is much better.
To start off, an apartment in a residential complex is very well planned & secure. This is because, the complex in question, lays down a set of rules and protocols to be followed by the people living in their respective apartments. As a result, the residents stay disciplined and in order. Furthermore, society based apartment complex are extremely well guarded with 24 X 7 security on gate including continuous monitoring of movement of people, including strangers, using closed CCTV cameras. But, there are a couple of disadvantages as well. The size of an apartment is not as big as an independent house. Also, there is not much possibility to do any modifications. This happens because of the guidelines laid down by the society's management. As a result, one does get enough space to move around and the people living inside develop a feeling of being inside a 'pigeon hole'. Furthermore, it also means, that there is less room for privacy.
On the other hand, having to live in a house can be a pleasurable experience because houses in general have bigger area compared to an apartment. That simply means, one has larger rooms, bigger kitchen & most importantly a big garden in the front. Having more area to move around leads to a feeling of openness and freedom. Moreover, this also enables high level of independence which is the result of privacy. Imagine, a family of four enjoying their meal outside in their home garden, with kids running all over the house and playing with their pets. This sounds like a luxury that someone living in an apartment cannot afford. Most importantly, with more open space available, biggest problems that the city faces can be solved by having a free to use & personal parking space. Having said that, there are always two sides of a coin. And, there are certainly few things that can act as a sore to the eye for any house owner. First off, maintenance of large homes is a challenging ask. It can rob off the owner's hard earned money. Bigger the house, more is the expenditure. This happens because, more effort and money is needed to maintain and service the expensive gardens or installations like a chandelier, decoration stuff, wall hangings etc. And, there is always a risk of theft which also results in expenses like installation of barbed wires, strong gate, CCTV cameras etc. Moreover, all of this has to be managed by the owner himself which can prove to be a big headache.
In conclusion, living in an apartment can be economical and attractive but living in a house of your own with freedom, independence and a sense of pride outweighs the peace of mind of living in an apartment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a roof on their head to live in a city. Although, some people choose living in a house w...
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Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...in a city. Although, some people choose living in a house while others think that ther...
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Line 5, column 679, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the biggest'.
Suggestion: , the biggest
...ortantly, with more open space available, biggest problems that the city faces can be sol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2490.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 521.0 315.596192385 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7792706334 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7384452197 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510556621881 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 802.8 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6901899832 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8620689655 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9655172414 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34482758621 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37200914079 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914741598009 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12698931643 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291048425379 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111755385552 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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