Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
There are various types of accommodation available nowadays to live for instance landed houses and apartments. some people prefer to stay in an apartment while the others like to stay in a house thus I will find this statement contentious and would allure on advantages and disadvantages of both the sides.
Firstly houses were an ideal place of living for many decades as compared to apartments which have gained popularity in the past decades. To live in a house presents a plethora of advantages the preponderant one being bigger space for extended family and privacy additionally you could also have your own private garden. Modification and alterations are easier to do in houses as sometimes you may need to alter the basic design as per your convenience without taking approvals from any local authority.
However, some people think that apartment have myriads of benefits the most preponderant one being the additional amenities as compared to landed houses. To elucidate lack of facilities like security, gym, swimming pool, sauna, sports facilities make apartments a more favourable place to live. Additionally, all the complaints in regards to issues like electricity, water, internet and telephone are managed by the resident association which makes it very convenient for the residents. apartment, on the other hand, have a clubhouse which makes socializing easier in vivid ways for people living in the apartments. On the other hand, there are a plethora of disadvantages, for instance, condominiums are expensive and have congested space as compared to houses.
In conclusion, it can be seen that living in houses presents far more disadvantages as compared to apartments as mentioned above thus, in my opinion, it is much better to live in an apartment than a house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25783972125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01001739009 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567944250871 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.953959161 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.181818182 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402463576513 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142145269758 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107759004848 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264576165534 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907324756206 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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