Some people prefer to spend more time improving their careers. Others think that it’s more important to spend time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Improving career prospects has become a common motive for many people in the modern era, and they usually prefer to spend most of their time looking for better employment opportunities, While others think that spending time with loved ones is essential in comparison to the former statement. In my opinion, it is vital to have a proper blend of professional and personal life.
To begin with, due to the tough competition at work make people to work harder to gain career growth and leave their rivals behind. In other words, they believe that giving more time to their occupation would bring promotion and increments, and this way their lifestyle would improve. For instance, An IT professional often works round the clock to support their customers hoping that someday their due diligence paid-off, and they will get a promotion with a higher salary. Further, rising expenditures and demands push people to look for ways to enhance their careers and earn more money to meet these necessities. As a result, they often enroll themselves in new technical courses and training to ameliorate their job options.
On the other hand, believing that family time holds more value also seems to be a correct statement as it acts as a way to overcome the job stress. If a person spends an entire day in the office and further, also work at night and weekends without having any time left for their family and friends, their mental and intellectual condition would deteriorate, and productivity would also go down drastically. Further, the main motive to earn a case is to have a relaxing and cheerful lifestyle rather than exploiting ourselves to earn just a few extra pennies. Hence, keeping a reasonable amount of time aside for family and companions is necessary.
In conclusion, although having a proper concentration on better employment opportunities is significant, in my opinion, spending a good time with family and friends is proportionally required. Hence, an appropriate balance of these two factors in human life is crucial for a prosperous and joyful life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'An' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: An; IT
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Message: Did you mean 'ameliorating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: ameliorating
...s in new technical courses and training to ameliorate their job options. On the other hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09384164223 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81990084922 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565982404692 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.431129651 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.615384615 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325513683423 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10465327227 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830436711251 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195163196923 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518317415114 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.