Some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle.Which of these do you prefer?What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by a car and a bicycle?

Essay topics:

Some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle.

Which of these do you prefer?

What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by a car and a bicycle?

People, these days are fighting against pollution as recent surveys show that there is a gigantic hike in the number of cars on the road majority in the metropolitan cities. It is debatable which mode of transport will be more efficient and effective. Some people say that cars are handier but a few believe that it adds more toxic gases to the environment and choose to ride a bicycle. In my opinion, I would opt-in for the bicycle which will save me hefty sum of money on conveyance.

Most of us have ridden the bicycle in our childhood. However, these days we select to drive a car over the bicycle because we need to keep our social status high. Choosing bicycles aids in improving our health in the long run and make our body more resistant to the common flu. If more number of people ride on cycles it will improve the air quality by depriving the pollution caused by the cars and the public transport. Recently, Netherland government regulated the rules for free availabilty of cycles for the populace and help them to save their money on transportation. There are several pros and cons for commuting by the car and a bicycle.

Motor vehicles are designed to save a lot of time in travelling and support people to focus on other intricate tasks but it adds up more heat to the ecosystem which is worsening global warming. However, cycles on the other hand helps in accomodating almost double the people to the existing road infrastructure wherein if you are interested in travelling to longer distances on it, you will able to take only a part of essentials. Like people travel on mountains using bicycles keep only crucial daily use products and rest of it can be purchased time to time.

In conclusion, cars are impacting our biological balance and deteriorating our health condition but moving to more eco friendly mode of tranportation like bicycle aids to improve the way we live and close to the nature.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he way we live and close to the nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71513353116 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67607751616 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543026706231 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9709200161 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2207643806 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725726924899 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407993458218 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123606828562 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456738513394 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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