Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
The controversial topic with respect to advertisements never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on whether advertising brings more benefits or drawbacks to people. I tend to agree that ads can influence people in positive ways, while some people claim that advertisements encourage impulsive purchasing behaviors.
Firstly, advertisements can help us improve our living standards because ads provide a platform for people to find out new information about products and services that can help people to work more efficiently and to live more comfortably. Take my own experience as an example. I used to struggle with cleaning my own apartment because of my busy work schedules. So, my apartment was always messy. After I saw an advertisement that sells professional cleaning services, I subscribed to their weekly cleaning service. As a result, my apartment is always spotless nowadays due to the excellent services that the cleaning company delivers on a weekly basis. But, if it was not for the advertisement, I would not have benefited from it. Therefore, my experience proves that advertisements can have positive impacts on people's life.
On the other hand, some people believe that many commercial ads can lead to impulsive shopping behaviors. They state that these ads deliver technically correct messages to audiences, but the tone of the ads is often misleading, which can potentially mislead the consumers to think that after buying the product or the service that the ad is trying to sell, they can have the dream life that they always want. But in reality, it is not often the case and these shoppers often feel regret after they purchase something that they do not actually need. However, they fail to realize that with governments' regulations on advertisements and some proper guidance on how the ads can be presented to the public and what contents can or cannot be included in the ads, this problem can be solved.
In conclusion, after analyzing the advantages and disadvantages that advertisements bring to people, it is obvious that there are more benefits than drawbacks that advertisements can bring to people's life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...wbacks that advertisements can bring to peoples life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19943019943 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00920522887 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541310541311 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0646118172 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197722818615 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605342812851 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556856076032 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12200514141 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03350973172 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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