Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern era, all the industries are producing a plethora of products to the market in order to the competitive world. All the markets which really reach not reach to the people for that advertisement will take it up to the big role to reach out to all the customer where really require those products.Some people are thinking advertisement will push them to buy the products but I believe that advertisement is really needed where we can get all the information related to this things.
On the other hand, Pupils generally watch the endorsement specifically for Health products, they will start to ask those particular products consecutively due to that they suffer some health issues. For Instance, children like to have only junk food in order that commercial advertisement, it will store their mind and they are expecting the same without knowing the causes. Stomach ache, diabetes an early age and liver problems because of junk foods.
On the one hand, Parents responsibility to provide the proper food to their children, even more, best if they prepare or buy nutritious foods for their children. First up all, we should know about each product in and out for that advertisement is highly important where we retrieve all the details related to the product. We need to make sure whether we get a good product or not for that people generally go for online reviews and they compare with this product to other products to get it low cost and better quality. Manufacturing sectors generally make plenty of advertisements so that It will reach to all of them and they can get a benefit and also customer can get a benefit.
To recapitulate this, we know the best products for our life in order to see the advertisement where we will get some ideas related to the product and how it will use for us. Government responsibilities about the health product will it impact pupils or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...mer where really require those products.Some people are thinking advertisement will ...
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Line 1, column 481, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... can get all the information related to this things. On the other hand, Pupils ge...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'junked'.
Suggestion: junked
...or Instance, children like to have only junk food in order that commercial advertise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82515337423 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80577608957 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3204221041 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203452888989 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790994012917 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675729492786 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135444241719 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052152117382 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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