Some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?
According to a section of the society,the education system focuses more on theoritical facts in comparison to the practical lessons. I agree with the statement as most of the students fail to perform well at a job after undergoing an entire course for the same subject.
The primary reason for lack of focus on practical skills contributes to low weightage of such skills during evaluation in examinations. The curriculam in all the universities or boards has been divided in such a way that practical exams only comprise of 25% of the total marks for a subject. this leads to more focus on the areas which help an individual score better marks.Moreover, teachers are also concerned about getting a good overall result instead of aiming for more understanding on a subject.Consequently, students give less importance to laboratory sessions.
Another reason which leads to low practical knowledge is the absence of equipments and electronic devices in the laboratories. The instruments used to conduct experiments are generally expensive and universities avoid investing an exorbitant amount of money. In addition to this,authorities prefer avoiding an mishappenings which could occur due to mishandling of chemicals in the researches.These should ideally be handled by proper training afrom the teachers.This approach has created a negative influence on the overall learning of the students.
In conclusion, the school authorities and teachers should focus on creating a better understanding in the students by conducting and demonstrating experiments themselves. Regular audits from the government can help in monitoring the situation of the eductional institutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58661417323 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51416052545 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3534840087 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10420944822 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397860112928 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253167565548 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576647984212 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123755847418 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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