some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person s culture and character from their choices of clothes Do you agree or disagree with opinion

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some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choices of clothes. Do you agree or disagree with opinion?

It is an innate nature of human being to judge each other. Many people argue that a person's tradition and behavior can be judged based on their style of dressing. I partially agree with this opinion and this essay will discuss in detail the reasons for that.

A person's fashion sense cannot be the actual representation of their culture or character always. This is because looks can be deceptive sometimes. This means that although a person might be wearing a sacred robe or jewelry, they could be an imposter who has negative intentions in their mind. Even there are people who has mastered skills of dawning all kinds of traditional clothes or behave in a convincing way in order to purposefully confuse the people interacting with them. One good illustration of this are the fake saints in India who have uncountable number of blind believers who fell for these imposter's God-like clothing and charming words, despite of knowing that their criminal background.

Conversely, majority of the people around the world wear clothes that represents their culture and character that makes it easier for people to guess their personality. This is common especially in rural areas where people are hardly influenced by western culture. For example, ladies in India often cover their head with edge of their saree, a traditional ladies wear in India, whenever they are in front of an elderly person. This kind of gesture and look shows that this women belongs to a family who follow traditional values and morale. Hence, clothing preference depicts the personality of a person to an extent.

In conclusion, I partially support the notion that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and personality based on their style of dressing. This is because even though there are many imposters, there are people whose dressing style is an actual representation of their culture and behavior.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...sentation of their culture or character always. This is because looks can be deceptive...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a convincing way" with adverb for "convincing"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... kinds of traditional clothes or behave in a convincing way in order to purposefully confuse the pe...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lady'?
Suggestion: lady
...with edge of their saree, a traditional ladies wear in India, whenever they are in fro...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...his kind of gesture and look shows that this women belongs to a family who follow tr...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, hence, look, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65506591255 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54375 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9078952954 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.933333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259707915089 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917896050756 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075182016803 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17015116151 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450585003915 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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