Some people say that its possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes, do you agree or disagree?
There is no gainsaying that the topic "choice of clothes" attracts immediate attention owing to its uniqueness. People around the world have diversified choices in terms of clothing and living. Some people believe that it is quite easy to identify any person's culture and characteristics through their clothing patterns. I completely disagree with this phenomenon, there are enormous cultures prevail globally which cannot be identified through masses clothing styles. I will support my views with valid arguments and examples.
To begin with, people living in western areas prefer pants and tops, whereas in the eastern countries, a person opts-in for long shirts and trousers. This reflects their culture, but cannot tell anything about their personal characters at all. Similarly, women in Bangladesh wear Sari's; It is their traditional dress that depicts the beauty of their culture but fails to tell us anything about their personality traits.
To elucidate it further, through the advancements in technology, the world has become a global village. Nowadays, people copy and adapt to multiple cultures and living styles which they observe through the internet. So it is now pretty difficult to deduce the cultural values and characteristics of any person through their dressing sense. For instance, I have known many people, who do modest clothing; but their characters are opposite to their clothing styles. In person, they are ambitious and adventurous in nature. To elucidate it further, there is an evident example of Mahatma Gandhi, who used to wear the only single piece of cloth to cover all his body. Surprisingly, he turned out to be the biggest threat for the British empires of that time by shaking their strong pillars in Sub-continent with his firm will and assertive attitude towards his demand for a separate country.
To summarize the aforementioned, it seems to be quite an irrational approach of analyzing any one's character or culture through their clothing sense. These identifications can be done through other traits such as living standards, the way of interactions, behavior with the poor class etc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, whereas, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36201780415 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88217493388 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60237388724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9542991524 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.294117647 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253624500978 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806640551604 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675005872357 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150988698689 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695044274898 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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