Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this world where everyone wants to stay fit and active, diet can help in maintaining a healthy lifestyle. Eating no meat or fish is becoming very common nowadays where vegans can be seen promoting benefits of eliminating meat from your daily food. In few parts of world, people avoid meat and fish due to religious reasons whereas in others, health benefits are the primary booster behind this initiative. What we need to understand here is the essentiality of have both vegetable and meet in our daily routine.
It can be seen that the old theory of having a balanced diet, which as per some pros includes both meet and vegetable is no more relevant as we can put so many examples of people around us, who are living on fruits and vegetables only. They are found perfectly fit with no or less deficiency of any vitamin as they are taking alternate sources of protein instead of meat and fish. They have a strong belief on righteousness of their vegan theory.
On contrary, there is the other group which focuses more on having meat as a part of daily diet to keep their protein level high as they strongly believe on the other side of picture. To some extent they are true as meat and fish is the instant source of protein and it also helps to improve the immune system.
In my humble opinion, one should have taste all the flavors of life by adding both meat and vegetable in our diet. Having a balanced diet will not only help us in staying fit but also a smart choice which ultimately help us in maintaining ourselves up for daily tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51601423488 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36237289906 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7334618341 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.363636364 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238575034533 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860957617695 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505931240762 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133659797277 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462993146359 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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