Indubitably, having financial stability is essential to survive and consequently live a life of acceptable standards but how major of a role it plays in the happiness of people will be discussed in this essay. Contentment has been related to money for a very long time albeit having a family and a good job are some of the many that actually bring happiness.
The exchange of commodities with money is how people trade in the 2nd century. Every purchase then is related to spending money just to obtain goods. During this process, eventually one will slowly observe a decrease in their savings and ultimately will have to reduce the number of purchases they wish to make. In an ideal world, everyone dreams of having umpteen amounts of cash flow that will enable them in purchasing anything and everything that they desire. The unrestricted access to commodities backed up by unlimited currency is how many images to pursue happiness.
On the other hand, a handful who do not restrict the boundaries of blissfulness just to money realizes that being surrounded by a family who cares and a job that is satisfactory can also be subsumed to bring joyfulness in one’s life. Firstly, People living with their parents, partners, and children find themselves to be content just by their presence. Knowing that there is someone who truly cares and is committed to you brings calmness to our lives. Secondly, a stable job where one is able to practice their interests and subsequently find success can also bring joy and satisfaction to people.
In conclusion, there are numerous ways to find happiness even though money has been linked to it for a long time, family and a job among the others that can lead a person to be content for personal gain rather than for worldly admiration.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...beit having a family and a good job are some of the many that actually bring happiness. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88486842105 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71999296976 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569078947368 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1855736233 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263968566457 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835181570164 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658240516967 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151977559583 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570343452929 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...beit having a family and a good job are some of the many that actually bring happiness. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88486842105 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71999296976 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569078947368 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1855736233 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263968566457 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835181570164 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658240516967 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151977559583 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570343452929 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.