some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
how might having a lot of money make people happy?
what other things in life can make people happy?
In the technologically advanced world, money plays an indispensable asset in human life.It is thought by some that happiness only can obtain huge money makes the individual to be happy and other ways to obtain happiness.In this essay,i will discuss how individuls gets happiness from money and ways to obtain happiness without money.
There are numerous ways to make people to be jubilant by huge money. Firstly . individual can buy any items which they desire to buy instantly. In other words, haring a lot of money. masses can buy their loved things instantly rather than thinking about the price. Although it is important, it is essential to fulfill their satisfaction. Moreover, a wealthy person can help to others those who have arduous time. A money needy person will be ecstatic when he receives help from wealthy people, By seeing this wealthy person will get satisfaction as well as joyful. For instance,one of my neighbours, had a hard time so certainty went and asked help from a wealthy person in that area .without concerning about anything he gave money immediately needy person and got satisfaction in his conscience for helping him.
There are enormous ways to get joyful without money. The main way being,individual can get happiness from family. When people point together and having a conversion or dinner will make them to be ecstatic. Even they can tackle any issue easily with family support despite of big problem. Furthermore, Individual work in their field and when they finish their work successfully they will get happiness from that.
In conclusion, Although money is crucial for life, it is not necessary to be happy. In addition, masses can get happiness from their professional field and family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13028169014 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78549644742 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 77.0630892398 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368214380313 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11066216909 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103842073367 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229058916297 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764098091632 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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