The society is more and more development. However many people still cannot get along with the change, which occur in the life of people continuously. Personally, the modern innovation has create many benefits for humankind.
Firstly, the modern innovation help people live and work in the safe environment. People need not to interact with dangerous animal and live in the severe conditions. For example, nowadays people live in concrete houses or apartment buildings with the elevator. Besides, machine and robot will supersede people to work in dangerous and harmful environment such as mine or chemical factory.
Secondly, the life of people will be more comfortable and convenient in the innovation. People will apply their strength and intelligence to produce products and services which serve for the demand of people. For instance, the banks create credit card and visa account to help people transfer money and pay quickly instead of send their money through the post office and pay cash when purchasing in supermarket.
Finally, people will have many opportunities to interact with new knowledge in the modern innovations. The modern innovations help people connect and narrow the distance of people around the world. Therefore, people can share their knowledge as well as experiences. For example, a photographer can share their photos on Facebook to introduce them to everyone. Moreover, a photographer can share experiences and receive more experiences for other photographers.
In conclusion, modern innovations which are made by people are not awful. Personally, I truly believe that modern innovation will make so many good changes in the life of people if people can take full advantage of the modern innovations.
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home 100
- People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before Is positive or negative development 78
- Question An increasing number of people are buying what they need online What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online 78
- Some people say modern innovations bring lot of problem than benefits Do you agree or disagree 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e society is more and more development. However many people still cannot get along with...
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Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
.... Personally, the modern innovation has create many benefits for humankind. Firstly, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'interact'?
Suggestion: interact
...n the safe environment. People need not to interact with dangerous animal and live in the s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will have many opportunities to interact with new knowledge in the modern innovat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40590405904 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90126555348 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4740985028 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1764705882 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189417015706 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767786333128 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065605507358 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124904928561 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501175039895 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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