Some people say that money can make life easier and more comfortable. But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems.
What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of money?
It is irrefutable that money brings ease and comfort in person’s life, however, anything in excess is not good and is with having excess money. Some group of people believe that having excessive money is disadvantage while others argue that it makes life luxurious. Below essay will discuss pros and cons of having too much money.
First and foremost, having money facilitates basic necessities and enhances the standard of living. For instance, surplus money can help to purse higher studies in reputed institutions and can have better life in future. Secondly, money can help in buying the ever evolving new technology and facilities which in turn helps to live comfortable life. For example, the newly introduced virtual assistant device in market, “Alexa”, this device has proven to give comfort to senior members.
Like every coin has two sides, having excess money also has its demerits. Rich people always have a tendency to buy expensive things to keep up their status in society. This leads to unnecessary buying and waste of money. Moreover, having excessive money may erode younger generation as they can get anything without facing any hardships. For instance, most of the children from rich class are always found addicted to heinous habits of drinking, smoking etc. They will not value money. Sometimes people also lose motivation in life and go in depression even after having excessive money.
In conclusion, I would say that every cloud has silver lining, having great amount of wealth can definitely improve ways to live comfortable life, however, knowing the worth and valuing same will also help in maintaining it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... and foremost, having money facilitates basic necessities and enhances the standard of living. Fo...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...d institutions and can have better life in future. Secondly, money can help in buying the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24436090226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63380410758 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2831094339 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362583514512 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123346542911 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774273102441 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217441304322 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505310465758 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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