Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
With the advent of pay-per-view entertainment platforms, there has been a shift in the way humans watch movies. And owing to these technological advancements, it is perceived by some that there is no need to go to theatres as one can easily see it at his/her place because of the ease in availability. In my opinion, though phones and other devices have paved a way to get that kind of entertainment at home because it helps in saving money, cinema halls are going to be there for the reason that the kind of experience they provide, cannot be compared to any other means and holds an important place.
Talking about the home based movie watching experience first, this type of method can play an instrumental role in saving money. With the influx of reasonable offers, one can easily get an access of up to a month with the same amount as of a movie ticket. To exemplify, Netflix recently came up with an offer only for mobiles in India which costs INR 199. Additionally, when people go out for a movie, they not only spend only movie tickets, but also on ultra expensive meals. Consequently, they can save a lot of money that can be used for some other important work and with the effect of inflation on ticket prices, they can avoid spending that much and even secure themselves from credit card and other debt traps.
Coming to the cinema hall, the kind of experience a person gets by spending time over here is beyond comparable. Watching them at a theatre enables viewers to experience better sound quality with larger screen size, something that is not possible at home. Moreover, they are not meant only to spend time, but rather spend it as a leisure activity. To illustrate, my family has a fix schedule of watching a movie every month at a local cinema hall. As a result, it helps to cope up with monotonous lifestyle and sometimes even teaches us how to behave or act socially. In addition, it helps in building better relationship between all members of the family and brings them closer.
To conclude, no one can deny that recent practices of enjoying movies via cell phones and laptops have posed a serious threat to multiplexes, but the cinema halls were made with the idea of a providing a unique experience, which as per me, will stay in every part of our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, in addition, kind of, talking about, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65110565111 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60302220011 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555282555283 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4965308666 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.2 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1333333333 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15630593172 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046032505752 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528319791283 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995168709056 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639013333265 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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