A great deal larger number of people are using smart phones for entertainment activities. Some people argue that to see movies is no more required to visit a cinema in the smart phones age, while others claim that cinema is the best place to enjoy a movie to its fullest. Both aspects of the matter will be illustrated in this essay.
On one hand, smart phones have revolutionalized the entertainment industry. It caused to make film market accessable to billion of people, around the day, month and years. People can amuse with any film of their choice while staying in their beds. They are no more required to pay for cinema tickets. Furthermore, time spent for commute between home and cinema can also be saved and thus can be escaped by the road-attached accidents.
In contrast, a visit to a cinema can provide visitors a very different experience. You get a chance to face a crowd. In addition, a large screen may offer people more thrill and excitement. Cinema visitors have great chance to make new friends and share their likes and dislikes, thus, they might acquir more social skills. While being in the theatre, people can enjoy their meals as well in the vicinity restaurants.
In conclusion, watching film on the smart phone, however, comes with great comfort of home, although in my perspective, visiting a cinema might be more excitement experience that might cause influence on the visitors' behavior positively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69525723891 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3493465254 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6428571429 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246407798253 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786651314505 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481950210821 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153922034982 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434461183973 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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