Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There is an ongoing controversy over whether to use a foreign language for study or work aboard is the only purpose for studying it. Somebody do not think that there is the objective other than to use it in the different country. However, in my opinion, I believe that learning new language can be caused by several reasons such as entertainment and part-time job.
First, other language helps people enjoy the entertainments from other countries, such as computer games from and movies from Japan or India. People will not be completely enjoyed, if they do not understand the language used in those media. Because some of computer games and movies have no translated versions, learning the new language is needed for someone who want to make their leisure time more fun. For example, my friend, who obsesses with movies so much, want to fully comprehend his favorite Japanese movie, so that he study Japanese by himself from the internet. Now he can use Japanese well, and translate Japanese movie for others as a hobby, making him so happy that he can do what he likes for others.
Second, a foreign language can use as a part-time job that creates more income for people. Nowadays, technology makes it easy to create money from anywhere in the world, and being a translator or a language teacher online takes not much time. Mobile application named “iTalki”, the platform that connects language teacher with someone to need to learn it, is an example of this career. There are massive of languages available in that mobile application, and tons of teachers, who can teach from even their bedroom. Clearly, learning language can create a job, even though that one doesn’t live aboard.
In conclusion, there are many reasons to study new languages and I am strongly convinced that using those languages aboard is not the only reason of knowing them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... only purpose for studying it. Somebody do not think that there is the objective o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232686980609 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.160664819945 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0941828254848 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498614958449 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0526315789474 0.0437548338989 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119113573407 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0387811634349 0.0403226058552 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68605198822 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0221606648199 0.0326793684256 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0720221606648 0.0861772015684 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0193905817175 0.021408717616 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016620498615 0.011925033212 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1873.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94603174603 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35873015873 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279365079365 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196825396825 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0920634920635 0.137316102897 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68605198822 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55873015873 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 59.6806920196 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8917899618 49.517814964 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.785714286 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.4365079365 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.48421052632 1.69124875643 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394755320203 0.332605444948 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122050918392 0.102741220458 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0791305027053 0.0668466124924 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.509765331947 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158060212681 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150945439587 0.134430193775 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597752286715 0.0742795772207 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.259904272842 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0371584404993 0.0638462369009 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268181136297 0.228012699653 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559953249823 0.058150111329 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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