Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The recent decades have witnessed a huge industrious development which has led to detrimental effects on the environment. Hence, there is an argument over the issue of who should shoulder responsibility for alleviating the situation. Some people believe that it is government’s duty to tackle the problem, while others would say that all members of society, by and large, can play a vital role on preserving the environment. Although, there are valid reasons for both group’s statement, I, personally, would lean towards the latter.
From standpoint of some people, as environment degradation is a large-scale issue, it would be solved solely by the government. For instance, in terms of green gas emissions to excess, government can handle the situation by enacting legislation leading to restriction on harmful gases use and giving punishment to factories that break the law. Furthermore, they can also allocate an expenditure on producing renewable energies such as wind, solar, and electricity which would be considered as a good substitute for conventional pollutant ones.
On the other hand, at the other end of this spectrum, there is a strong belief that all individuals are responsible for conserving the environment. Taking an environmentally friendly approach, people are capable of staving off the gravity of the predicament. Using public transportation system and electric cars can be mentioned as good illustrations culminating in a greener environment. Also, it is interesting to note that, if people commence to protect environment individually, there will be no requirement for strict legislation and considerable expenses. As a result, the individuals’ role should be considered as far the more important one.
By way of conclusion, both government and people are responsible for protecting the environment. Nonetheless, each individual can stem the tide of this issue before becoming serious and widespread.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, nonetheless, so, while, for instance, such as, as a result, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56949152542 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38552268652 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616949152542 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9443490422 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.357142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281143917852 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920353874591 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838474622079 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171110030821 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534221247869 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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