The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
Given are two figures indicating the average monthly temperatures in three metropolises –namely New York, London and Sydney- as well as giving a comparison of their yearly hours of sunshine. From the information supplied, it is apparent that Sydney follows a completely different pattern in terms of monthly temperatures. Furthermore, London receives by far the least amount of sun ray in a year.
Looking at the line graph in more details, it can be seen that New York and London reach have their lowest temperature in January with approximately 5 and 10 degree respectively. Experiencing a consistent rise, both cities reach a peak in July before dropping again to low temperatures in December which are just slightly over those of January. Nonetheless, witnessing the highest and lowest temperature, New York alterations are more considerable than London.
In stark contrast, Sydney experiences its hottest days in January and December with 25 degree. It also reaches its lowest degree at somewhere in the vicinity of 15 in July. It is interesting to note that Sydney has the overall highest monthly temperature in comparison to other areas.
According to the table, in terms of total annual hours of sun ray, London receive the lowest amount with just 1180 hours annually. Sydney and New York come to the second and third place with 2473 and 2535 respectively.
Overall, the pattern of monthly temperatures in Sydney is contrary to New York and London. New York witnesses the highest and lowest temperature, whilst London is the cloudiest city.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 75, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (London) must be used with a third-person verb: 'receives'.
Suggestion: receives
...f total annual hours of sun ray, London receive the lowest amount with just 1180 hours ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, nonetheless, second, so, third, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23412698413 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95343416527 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551587301587 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5171755539 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113506992574 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440903132621 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548749690288 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679169576681 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555893131578 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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