Some people spend a lot of money for their wedding ceremonies. However, others feel like it is unnecessary to spend a lot. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.
Clans of masses would like to splash out their hard earn money for marriage while others would like to limit their marriage expense. However, I agree with the later notion which I will elaborate more with suitable illustrations in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, the main reason behind spending huge money is to show off to their relatives, friends and colleague. If they spend a lot that means they have earned very good amount which shows up their status. For instance, the Times of India has conducted one survey with 1000 newly married couple who had spend mammoth amount on their wedding and they said that it was compulsion for their status. Secondly, folks also reckon that we marry only once in a life then this day must be not only memorable but also we must have best entertainment. Unless you spend more, you cannot have these things. In recent times these entertainment industries will cost you more. Thus, person spends a lot.
On the other side, spending hard earn money in marriage is just a waste of money according to other individuals. They would like to save for future for an unexpected days and unavoidable circumstances which are significant for anyone. Even future is uncertain. In addition to, humans believe in simplicity. For example, one international survey declared that 49% of human beings would like to marry in a simple way because for them marriage is only one ritual which we can follow in a most simple way without blowing out money.
According to my viewpoint, there is no meaning to lavish out just for show off because you should save for remaining life either you can utilize for your future home.
In conclusion, even though spending a huge amount in marriage is one kind of status symbol, we should control our expenses. It had better chalk out a plan for a safe future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couples
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Suggestion: spent
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Suggestion: spent
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
... be not only memorable but also we must have best entertainment. Unless you spend more, y...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...49% of human beings would like to marry in a simple way because for them marriage is only one r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80063291139 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50324857034 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9090471617 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2352941176 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232150714004 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779154988996 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691909409879 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118153530025 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487462999545 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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