Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Do you think this is positive or negative development?
A large bunch of people likes to spend lavishly on sports shows, cinema and musical performances. some people feel it should be encouraged and some absolutely feels the vice-versa. While some boosts this positive development and some completely treats it as a total waste of money, time and resources. However, I will be discussing both the views below.
Firstly, people do have a great taste in such events that in turn help them in rejuvenating themselves and I personally feel that there must be some sort of entertainment to help ourselves cope up or to feel motivated enough. This kind of events helps people understand diverse cultures and helps the tourism industry. For instance, India hosted Common Wealth Games in the capital city, new Delhi where athletes from different parts of the world came to participate which helps in the tourism and the infrastructure of the city.
Secondly, such feeling of representing one’s own country at some national or international level gives a person a patriotic feeling owing to the reason that people are not much aware of the bounty of benefits that comes with attending such type of events. people get absolutely exposed to the new lifestyle, a new culture and the most important being a new horizon of learning ways of life.
On the other hand, some people feel treat it entirely as a waste of money as it incurs other costs like food, accommodation, transportation charges as well. these people are of the opinion that rather than wasting money on such events, it could have been invested in gold or some other type of investment.
In conclusion, contrary to what people think spending money on sporting events is not a waste of money. In my opinion, it is a good way of revitalising yourself and people should realize the benefits of embarking on such trips.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91233766234 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77805800108 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3049522393 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.384615385 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269607888534 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991745112283 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754213469189 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149964308637 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612694879364 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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