Today’s food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
Admittedly, various categories of food has to travel a long distance before reaching the consumer. some exotic fruits and vegetables which are not available locally have to travel to reach the customer’s plate. From my perspective, this trend has both positive and negative effects and I will be discussing both sides of the coin.
Firstly, exporting food from outside the country affects the quality and the taste of the product. However, preservatives and other ingredients are mixed with it to keep it fresh but it does have an impact on our health. Secondly, the more time it takes from the field to the plate, the more likely nutrients in it are likely to perish. Lastly, exported food from another country will cost more as compared to the locally grown food, the prices are exorbitantly high. For instance, Singapore does not produce anything of its own and export all the items from its neighbouring countries like water and rice from Malaysia; vegetables and fruits from Thailand and few products from China and Australia. Irrefutable to say that, this is the reason that Singapore is one of the costliest city to live in.
On the other hand, people get introduced to new exotic vegetables and fruits which are not locally produced in their own country. Owing to the reason that some countries cannot produce few crops due to unfavourable climatic conditions. Moreover, people can have a wide range of products in the supermarket which can be available throughout the year. Also, there will be less consumption of land for farming purposes and more and more constructions can be done to accommodate the population.
To recapitulate, while people depend more on imported items for their own choices. In my opinion, this topic has both positive and negative aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... distance before reaching the consumer. some exotic fruits and vegetables which are ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 395, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ood from another country will cost more as compared to the locally grown food, the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0406779661 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76287615192 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549152542373 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5861396239 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152767691819 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058025826836 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751469977825 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120566717312 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114269285741 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.