some people tend to behave anti social and also do the crime is the society to blame what are the causes and who is the responsible

Essay topics:

some people tend to behave anti-social and also do the crime, is the society to blame?
what are the causes, and who is the responsible?

in this rapidly changing world, people have been spending time by playing games or doing any sort of activities on their gadgets. It leads the implication to leave a life without social dependency has created the barrier in societies, more and more people have become formal and for the sake of talk, doing conversation. due to this, a major part of the world having affected and causing the sudden change in human behaviour. Sometimes people motivate to commit crimes due to various reasons such as loneliness, abstain the material things and joyful life etc.people often blame to the authorities and parents, friends and so on. however, I believe that an individual who commits these offence are responsible.

eminent researchers in the psychologist fields have found a pattern about the reflection of works change the social behavior.firsly, people constrain themselves in small part of the world which creates social aloofness around the places where they daily present. secondly, introvert nature has also large amount of social impacts as it isolated with other human beings, as a result, people feel inferior and also think like a small minded person. lack of social coexistence in human impacts the harmony between people. on the rare occasions, people perpetrate the crime which is unethical and morally disgraceful.

There are situation and circumstance which leads to doing the crime and blaming society or another thing which is not convincing. being an anti-social does not infuse the feeling of hatred. in fact, other than introvert behaviour, external factors are more affecting to human beings and it motivates to become a delinquent. Hence, it is not an appropriate to blame societies, teachers, parents or accompanies. However, children are very impressionable, also they pursue someone's thought, traits quickly. Though, they do not know what they are doing is right or wrong. Therefore, parents are responsible until children become mature or adult.

In conclusion, No one has the freedom to blame the societies for the dirty deeds of an individual. Additionally, on larger extent, being introvert or extrovert is just attribute of human.

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Average: 9.4 (7 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, another thing, in conclusion, in fact, sort of, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32944606414 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84567520726 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600583090379 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6306340146 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268351586906 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703046639972 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444302474236 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139899286566 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501345523278 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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