people can not live without the internet. do you agree or disagree?
In this rapidly changing world, technological advancement has changed the life of an individual significantly. Eminent psychologists are debating on the topic of the internet; Whether accessing the internet daily is enhancing the information and knowledge of a person or it is just an addiction which distracts to human. Hence, it is inevitable to find-out up-to what extent people can live a life without the internet. As a normal human being, I agree that it is impossible to imagine a life without internet.
There are numerous reasons behind the support of living a life with the use of internet web. Firstly, use of the internet brings a fundamental growth as well as provides a platform to become an expert. For instance, a myriad source of information on internet augments the immense knowledge by only flipping the web-pages. As a consequence, attainable information makes a person acute and master of that field in short time. However, without the use of an internet, it would be difficult to find out materials and books which are printed in other parts of the world. Hence, proliferating the use of an internet is an absolutely additive advantage compared to relies on physical or manual things.
On the contrary, living a life without internet is possible and it also has merits. an excessive use of internet deteriorates the person's health. An elucidating evident is the impact on eyes. As starring on computer or electronics devices can impair the vision. Additionally, staying a long time in front of gadgets may reduce the physical strength due to continuously looking ar internet without changing the body posture. Additionally, addiction of internet reduces the efficiency and time utilization because of advancement and other tempting information hooked on the internet. Moreover, people live aesthetic life, if they keep distant from the internet. Aforementioned reasons motivate a person to live life without internet.
In conclusion, living with trends are always beneficial rather than to abandon the use of the internet. However, priorities are more important to accomplish tasks to stay-away from internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'rely'.
Suggestion: rely
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: An
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rnet without changing the body posture. Additionally, addiction of internet reduces the effi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in short, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30294117647 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07059246112 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532352941176 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9387335055 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.15 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294629875861 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102285314733 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810045680294 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193239042872 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731643730902 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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