Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?
Spending adolescent days on a positive path is vital for society as well as for individuals. It is thought by some experts that youngsters should volunteer their leisure time for social work. I partly concur with this thought process.
To embark on, there are numerous people out there who need various kinds of help from the government or society. Teenagers can spend part of their free time to help these needy citizens, which will be helpful for them to understand the hardships of the overall society, and it will give a new perspective to their life as well. Additionally, if teenagers focus their energy in a constructive path then they will not end up with any bad habits such as alcohol, cigarettes and so on. As the saying goes “An idle brain is the devil’s workshop”. So, it is good to occupy the children’s mind in a positive path.
On the other hand, Teenagers should be allowed to have a bit of fun in their spare time. It is not fair to ask them to spend all of their time only on studies and community work. They need to enjoy some of their leisure in fun activities. Furthermore, they will have to handle more responsibilities once they are entire into adulthood. Parents should give adequate freedom to teenagers, which will help them to avoid unbearable physical and mental stress. For instance, youngsters should be allowed to go to movies, parties, and short trips with their friends. So that they will not feel the pressure all the time and will be happy to contribute to society as well.
To sum up, it is good to involve the younger generation in social work in their free time but one should not spend all of their free time in community activities. They should be enjoying part of their spare time with fun activities which they love.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as for, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71565495208 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69564134383 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520766773163 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0222256592 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8235294118 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265893183712 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896328420737 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589126862415 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173623035893 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524157071295 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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