Some people think that cities are the best place to live in. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside.
It is important for people to consider which type of living place they should stay in. While some people believe that cities are much better place to live, others think that a rural area is more preferable. This essay will highlight the benefits and the drawbacks that results from such a trend.
To begin with the positives, a crucial advantage of living in urban areas is that this kind of living tend to provide a lot of employment opportunities . For instance, there are a number of industries and companies established within the cities which facilitate a lot of people to meet their daily needs. Furthermore, the educational institutes are often much better equipped to provide high quality of learning. Conversely, it is rare in countryside to possess such high class schools and universities, and high salaried jobs.
Nevertheless, living in cities does present some drawbacks. The most obvious of which are pollution and unhealthy lifestyle. With regards to the former, as aforementioned, where industries provide work to people, it is also a major cause for global warming. A recent survey done by a local university shows that factories are the foremost reason which tend to cause air and water pollution. As for the latter, people in cities usually prefer junk foods which cause many diseases like obesity, heart attack which in turn reduce life expectancy. In contrast, people who are living in countryside are generally surrounded by pollution free environment and organic food which help them to live much longer healthy life.
In conclusion, although the advantages of well-paid occupations and well-equipped institutions that living in cities offers, the problems of toxic environment and unwell living standard should be taken into consideration when compared to the life in the rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24742268041 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87564192414 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.788928972 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.071428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405620560501 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132497946857 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143548370752 0.0667982634062 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254861127245 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836983901968 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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