Some people believe that natural ability is necessary to be successful at sports. Others believe that hard work and practice is more important. Discuss both sides and add your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, an achievement in sports plays a quintessential role in the life of a player. While some people assert that this can be obtained only if a person has innate talent, whereas, others believe harwork and perseverance is the key to achieve success in sports. I agree with the latter view as dedicated training and devotion to the game makes the players proficient and successful.
To begin with, those who consider hereditary skills are required for a successful sports career, reckon that genes of the skilful parents get transferred to their children which make them talented by birth. As a result, most of the children born in sports family become the sportsmen once they grow up and many of them achieve popularity in their games. For example, the Indian Olympic gold medalist wrestler Bibita Phogat is the daughter of an experienced wrestler who polished the inbuilt skills of her daughter to make her capable to achieve the zeniths of success. Alternatively, if these talents are not inherited, then it will be impossible to accomplish goals without harwork.
On the flip side, most of the people think that to be a sports achiever it is essential to practice dedicatedly, I fully support this notion. The reason for this is that the regular training of a game under the supervision of a skilled trainer and enthusiastic participation can transform an unskilled person into a professional player. Moreover, proper guidance and regular practice sessions make the sportsmen more disciplined and inculcate in them the qualities of better sportsmanship. For instance, a two-times winner in Commonwealth Games, an archery player Raghuvendra Singh is an engineer by profession, however, with the help of immense training and enthusiasm he fulfiled his passion of archery and become famous archer in the world.
In conclusion, although, gaming skills inherited from parents help to raise the proficiency and popularity of the individuals, in my opinion, the skills acquired with firm practice and diligence make them more famous as it nurtures the players with discipline and dedication.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
..., most of the people think that to be a sports achiever it is essential to practice de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28189910979 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96469910455 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572700296736 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3100026596 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.333333333 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108436168192 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418183430624 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605730841901 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706806280089 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393023508328 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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