Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
There has always been a raging debate between city dwellers and those who live in the country regarding which place offers a better life. This essay would explore both schools of thought to see things in perspective.
The plus point of the former is rather easy to enumerate. Better schooling, medical care, jobs, transport, malls and clubs exit in the cities than any village would ever be able to match. Little wonder that people shift to the urbanized areas of their countries by the thousands every year.
However, according to the contrary viewpoint, these plus points are the exact reasons why some avoid these crowded, stuffed gas chambers called cities and opt out for the villages. For one, the air is fresh and vibrant and no one has to queue up for anything, be it a bus or a cinema ticket. They say one kills oneself to become rich in a city and then spends the fortune on getting healthy.
Personally, I have always wondered why the rich build farm houses in the country after working for a decade in the cities while the villagers crave to shift to same cities? I would want to pick best of both words and live in a small town which has the amenities but not the mad rush of a sprawling city.
To conclude, both sides of the discussion have undeniable merit. On one hand, the cities offer a life full of excitement and economic progress, while, on the other hand, the country offers one the chance to really enjoy each breath when in the cities it is even difficult to breathe.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, regarding, so, then, well, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4907063197 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17964365217 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 269.0 20.2975951904 1325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1208.0 106.682146367 1132% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 269.0 20.7667163134 1295% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 84.0 7.06120827912 1190% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206298014192 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206298014192 0.084324248473 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105671195703 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041940296686 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 134.2 13.0946893788 1025% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -184.64 50.2224549098 -368% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 105.8 11.3001002004 936% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.24 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.91 8.58950901804 232% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 109.6 10.1190380762 1083% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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