It is often argued by some individuals that government aid should be provided to people with creative skill sets, like musicians, film stars, and painters. I disagree with the above notion and believe that every artist with a creative mind-set possesses adequate capability to earn money and there are already several options for artists to show their talent to the world and become famous.
Nowadays, it is not a difficult task for creative people to earn money as there are plenty of opportunities for these people to flourish and connect with people. Since the introduction of social media and different networking sites, artists can easily reach people and show their talent. This results in earning enormous money through an increasing number of viewers and paid advertisements. Many musicians, for instance, post their videos and songs on networking sites, like Facebook, YouTube and earn a vast sum of money from viewership and commercials. Such platforms give an opportunity for artists to commence their professional careers and succeed in their lives; therefore monetary benefits from the administration are not essential for creative people.
However, there should be initiatives by the government authority to help people to pursue their career in these fields, in other words, art and craft education should be easily accessible to people with substantially low cost so that maximum people would get an opportunity to join these educational programs and pursue art as their career. Not only will this allow people from rural parts of the country to enhance their skills but also to initiate their professional careers. For example, the Indian government has recently taken such an initiative by opening the second film city of the country in the northern state, Uttar Pradesh, this allows youth to gain artistic skills by staying near to their home.
To conclude, some people believe that monetary aid should be provided to artists by the state agencies to support them in their professional careers. I completely disagree with this statement and believe that in today's generation, people with creative minds have enough opportunities to easily bring their talent to people and earn enormous money. However, the people in authority should provide educational and skill enhancement support to people who want to pursue their career in the field of art and craft.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29894179894 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70997238682 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505291005291 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1622980858 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.076923077 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0769230769 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265546680902 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112989353021 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535099697182 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18887530713 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327245444002 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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