Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, upward climate change represents a major threat to the entire world as its harsh impacts on human life. Many opine that people had better embrace and no longer comes up against his phenomenon. Personally, I totally disagree with the statement above as I believe that there are a number of useful methods are once carried out could lessen changes in climate.
Initially, with an intent to mitigate climate change, the government should strictly regulate people’s environmentally-destructed activities. Global warming which originates from exhaust fumes, deforestation, and people’s cognition is one of the most serious causes that provoke unexpected changes in the weather. Governments are expected to impose some fines on people who break the rules and contaminate the environment. Hence, the authorities’ supervision enables people to reduce the number of emissions on a daily basis which leads to the improvement in the climate change. The UK, for instance, rarely cope with the natural disaster as they possess many rational policies which significantly control the fluctuations of weather.
Furthermore, instead of accepting to suffer from climate variation, people rather formulate a new plan to reduce this situation. Without a doubt, under the strong development in technology aspects, people are supported to expose to the understandings which relates to the climate change and the environment in general. Additionally, in order to effectively gain knowledge, people, especially, youngster are required to join many forums, volunteer works and give the environment a hand to alleviate climate change. In fact, the countries which have high people intellectuality rarely undergo the severe influence of this phenomenon.
In conclusion, tackling this severe issue required getting high notice of people from the entire world. In spite of living with climate change, paying attention to find a solution for the mentioned matter will definitely bring better outcomes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...notice of people from the entire world. In spite of living with climate change, pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65666666667 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18247108741 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623333333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4970844132 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.214285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204940611741 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065963972062 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310929622725 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118900993366 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0057230464696 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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