Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
People from a certain section of society believe that career development is more important because of rising competition in modern society. While others opine that being more socialized is more important so as one can have quality time with their family and friends.
On the one hand, there enormous reasons why some people inclined to invest more time in career building. Firstly, when a person devotes more time to skills development, he may get more financial returns. Therefore, financial stability gained so does not only bring improvement in people’s lives but also brings a sense of fulfillment. Financial security plays a vital role in people’s lives as it helps in covering daily expenses and to pay school fees for their children. Secondly, a reputed job helps in achieving a high standard of living along with a high status in society.
On the other hand, opponents of the aforementioned view believe that focusing solely on career, while neglecting family and friends, is not a healthy practice. It may have long term repercussions on health. As per the recent survey, people living in developed countries who pay more time to their work were surveyed and it was found that they were suffering from stress-related diseases or depression. Surveyors advised them to have a balanced lifestyle by changing their habits and spending adequate time with their families.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that professional success is vital in one’s life but they should choose a balanced approach in their life to enjoy life the greatest extent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: termed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18972332016 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80134836961 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0120100628 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.416666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298205097346 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101397504411 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875058268931 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171594679108 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113341893065 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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