Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some prefer making friends with completely like-minded people, while others prefer making friends with people who have slightly different interests. I strongly agree with the latter preference since these small dissimilarities are pivotal for healthy, long-lasting friendships.
On the one hand, fully compatible friends can avoid conflict in their friendships. For example, when two like-minded friends go to the cinema, they tend to agree with any idea the other suggests, such as which movie they should see or what popcorn flavour they should buy. As a result, these friends can avoid unnecessary conflict that can become intense, damaging their harmonious relationships.
On the other hand, friends who sometimes have disagreements can make their friendships less monotonous. For example, when two friends argue over what movie they should watch, they will have a chance to compare the strengths and weaknesses of different movies. This comparison is a new experience that these friends may not have if they are always agreeable in all matters. Therefore, disagreements do not necessarily mean they are detrimental to friendships. In fact, these disagreements season the relationships by adding more fresh experiences to make the relationships more adventurous.
In my opinion, having some disagreements is more beneficial to healthy, long-lasting friendships because disagreements make friendships more interesting with new arguments and experiences. On the contrary, if two friends only support each other's ideas with no new argument introduced, these friends may become disinterested in one another at some point in the future; hence, their friendship is not likely to flourish in the long-term.
In conclusion, having some disagreements is vital for maintaining sustainable and fruitful friendships. Disagreements are a special kind of spice in friendships and without them, the friendships will be tedious and incomplete.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75694444444 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25699626824 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7907827409 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249546813321 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089345681162 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697161361182 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13924605331 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506687525786 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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