Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is an irrefutable fact that most of the individuals are running between time and money to sustain in competitive world. In this swifting world some people look for satisfaction in their job and other look for secured one. This essay will discuss why the job security is necessary and also discuss why job satisfaction is utmost imperative over and above the job security.
First of all it is worth considering the latest technological inventions are replacing the humans in most of the work places; as a result there is lack of job security amongst most of the individuals. When compared to human's these bots can work round the clock, and can give accurate results. Recently, computers have replaced several clerical employees in many multinational companies in Germany. Therefore, in this modern world a job security is significant factor where there is expected economic crisis and recession.
However, for some factions, job satisfaction is the highest priority, as it will not only have work life balance, but also has several long run benefits. Prime reason behind this is, the individuals can work at their own will and interest, therefore, there will be no stress, and can achieve high productivity on top of that, they can also balance between job and family. This can be seen in increasing number of people who are working as a fixed term employees who wants to change the job according to their interest. Even though there is a risk of working in a temporary job, one can find happiness in delivering their duties.
Weighing up both sides, although there are some benefits of a secured job, maintaining job satisfaction has ultra prominent pros. As far as I am concerned, I tend towards satisfactory job over permanent job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, as a result, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96575342466 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81683442927 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1673695854 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316300963868 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123390105214 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904675147131 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217792787279 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870604809518 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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