Some people think the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In the salad days of the millennium, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally. Regarding the issue that, whether latest technology make people more sociable or less sociable. However, different people have their distinct mindset. In my opinion, modern technology make people's life more convenient but also make people out of natural things. The following paragraphs would shed light on both of the view and explain it with an apt example.
To begin with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. according to some people, latest technology such as computer, smartphones, tabs make people more sociable. this means, people can communicate and share with one another anytime. For example, By the help of cellphones anyone and contact with their beloved one when they want either its day or its midnight. As a result, communication between people are much easier and people become more closer than past. In addition, modern technology helps people saving their times. Therefore, today people didn't need to see one another face to face they can meet via vedio calls and messenger. so, people can save these time for another work.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, according to some other people, Future invention make people less active and people become home-keeping because of this. Hence, many young spend most of the time in social networking websites, which not only disconnect them from real world but also make them lethargic. For instance, according to a survey in 2018, 70% of college graduates lack social and communication skills when they apply for their first job. AS a result, they get less promotions. Moreover, due to obsession with virtual friends, rather than forming meaningful and healthy bonds with surrounding people, people believe in temporary and meaningless relationships. consequently, we are dealing with increasing number of insensitive and intolerance individuals.
In Conclusion, technology is a double-edged sword. so it is up to people how much they should rely on it for socialization. If it is effectively utilized, it is a blessing else it just a curse for mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24495677233 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77487646091 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610951008646 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5006611512 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7727272727 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13636363636 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328289832925 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932316556812 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105097527601 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196175972308 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110075031561 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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