Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There exist many well-known museums across the world nowadays. While some believe that they should be a site for recreational purposes, others, however, have the opinion asserting that these places are to educate the public. I, for one, think the former view is correct on the basis of some compelling reasons.
On the one hand, museums can act as educational centers. First and foremost, holding many unique objects related to old times, these museums are of great importance for archeologists and history students. They visit these places in order to either conduct their researches or seek evidence of our ancestors' life. That is, museums can be good sites to ascertain about distinct dynasties and their people whom they would rule on. Second, many anthropologists find museums a suitable place so that they can learn from how people of specific times used to live. As an illustration, the lifestyle of ancient people can be identified through analyzing the unearthed items.
On the other hand, I think the number of people who visit these sites to educate themselves are in minority. In fact, many individuals purchase museum passes mostly to entertain and create a memorable time with their family and friends. Apart from some tour guide agents who provide visitors with brief information about the objects being kept, all the visitors tend to experience centers around enjoying their time. The museums themselves also have not been built as educational sites. Many governments count on these sites as a handsome source of income. Take the countries which have famous museums as an example; the revenue accruing from the selling tickets would be so huge that the local authorities try to urge as many tourists as possible to visit their museums. Thus, considering the purpose of these locations to educate people is just a vacuous notion.
In conclusion, although there would be some attractions for people who want to truly learn knowledge in museums, the majority of visitors opt for them only as a leisure pursuit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, thus, well, while, apart from, i think, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11144578313 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60818155936 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58734939759 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1879439945 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8235294118 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330122089387 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100075118388 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526662396687 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188914345344 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618941819068 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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