Some people think that newspapers are the best media to learn and get information from, while others believe that the Internet is a better source. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Few men and women deem that information can be best received and learnt through newspapers whereas some argue that the Internet is a better medium compare to newspapers. Although, traditional way has some merits, I believe that utilization of cyberspace is good compare to tabloids and this essay will discuss both the arguments.
To commence with, the price of newspapers are kept low that everyone can afford it esspecially poor people and on top of that it is printed in local languages. So, everyone can read it easily. Moreover, newspapers are easily accessible medium to get because it is not only available in cities but also in rural areas. Additionally, every field is included in newspapers that it can be fathomed without searching specific information like the Internet. However, sometimes it displays only negative things as well as spread wrong news. For example, a famous newspaper 'Gujarat Samachar' always speaks against the Prime Minister of India. Furthermore, people will not have to wait for the next day to get updated with surroundings esspecially on national holidays. Hence, I believe that Internet is better source of information.
On the contrary, there are plethora of reasons to support the Internet to get familiriazed. Firstly, people can get updated news as per their convenient time as it is a faster mode than newspapers. Secondly, if people have Internet connection then they can surf need without paying extra money. Thirdly, videos and better description make news easily understandable than conventional way. To illustrate, people will better know the news about surgical strike by India, if it will be presented in video format. Despite of having numerous benefits, the price of the Internet are too exorbitant to get connected with it. In addition to that, it is still a matter of question about accesibility of Internet in rural areas. Though, I believe that it is the best way to get information.
In conclusion, agglomerating all the above mentioned points, however, newspapers have ample of advantages, I believe that preference should be given to the Internet and it is recommended that people should be inclined more towards hyperspace.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22159090909 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93665364984 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3886265911 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7368421053 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5789473684 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239033662172 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718451901949 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463215885061 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145129163535 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405249649409 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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